There was a boy who was called Jason. His parents were killed when he was 10, he is 15 now. His parents were killed by a dangerous creature. The creature attacks people terrorising them then after he kills them. Jason hates the creature he want to destroy it. Today Jason gets ready to fight and kill the creature. Jason knew that the creature will come today, as soon he saw the creature he attacked the creature. Jason punched it in the face and after he choped the creature’s head. Jason finally revanged his parents. All the people thanked Jason by making him the king.
April 28, 2016 at 4:50 pm
Hello Christian,
You have shown an understanding of the structure of myths but this all happens in one paragraph. There are lots of ideas here that could be developed into individual paragraphs.
What ideas do you think you should develop?
When you have finished, remember to check your verbs, how can you use these to help set tense (past? present? future?)